Hello my name is Lauren. I am 9 years old. I was born in New Zealand in 2002. I have long black hair and my skin is soft and smooth. My eyes sparkle and I think I am beautiful.I have three lovely sisters and a handsome brother. I live with my brother, sister and my beautiful mum and dad. I love my family because they take care of me.
I am Tongan and I am very proud to be Tongan.
My best friend is Leigh-Amber because we share things like our lunch, ideas and home stories. I enjoy playing with Leigh-Amber and I think she is a kind and friendly person. She knows how to make me feel better when I am sad.
When I grow up I what to be a teacher because teaching and learning new things is fun. I also want to be a netball player because I want to represent my culture by playing in the Tongan netball team.
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ReplyDeleteHi Lauren,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your description. I like how you used adjectives to describe your best friend Leigh-Amber.
Continue to use powerful describing words to help you achieve your Writing goals this year.
Ms Aireen
Hi Lauren,
ReplyDeleteI like the work you have done on your all about me description. I think you have done a wonderful job.
By Rebekah
BFF
Lauren
ReplyDeleteI loved your story all about me because it has a lot of interesting facts and I will get to know you better as a friend because it tells me what you like.