Wednesday 28 May 2014

Explanation writing Plan - Why you cannot live without your chosen invention

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Why you cannot live without your chosen invention?  

Remember the S.E.E. structure
S
Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - An invention I cannot live without is . . .
E
Explain - Define the cause - I cannot live without it because . . .
E
Evidence - explain the effect of the cause -  I use it . . .

Title
What is your Explanation about?
An invention I cannot live without is a Netbook
Introduction
What are you going to explain?  Why is it important for us to pay attention to what you have to say?
My invention I can’t live without is a Netbook. Netbooks is important because they are tools you use for learning and they help you when you learn new things. Netbooks are awesome because they have shortcuts to make things easier and faster. If I didn’t have this invention it will be hard for me to cooperate with this modern life. I could have not survived but I'm not trying to exaggerate but it’s my life!.   
Paragraph One
Why is this invention so important to you?  How can it be used by you?
The invention that I can not live without is a Netbook. I've chosen this because this tool is for learning. I had this netbook for 2 years and this is the third year I’ve used it. Netbooks are very important to me because I can do my homework and finish work that needs to be completed. I can use my netbook everyday.The thing I like about netbooks is that the world can see what I do when I blog my work and blog it to the standard expected and also I can also email my family members far from me. I never use netbooks to chat to people that’s just wasting money spending it for a netbook to chat to other people like my classmates and people that are acquainted because it’s just spam.
Paragraph Two
What are some ways that other people use the invention? Why? How does it affect others?
I think that people use this invention for a different purpose like chatting to others and going on facebook and twitter. People might just use their money to spend on a netbook to use it for a different purpose. This can cause damage to your netbook if a coffee spills on you and your netbook. It might cost a lot of money to get it fix.
Paragraph Three
What would life be like without the invention? Explain the different effects.
Life would be hard without this invention because things will be a lot hard for us to write in our books and people around the world might not see what we do at school and what we have been learning everyday. This affects us by using it everyday for the right purpose and show the world what you have been doing in school and learning about different things.
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
If I didn't have this invention it will be hard for me to cooperate with this modern life. I could have not survived but I'm not trying to exaggerate but it’s my life!.                       

This document is all about our Explanation writing plan witch is all about why you cannot live without this Invention?. My invention I chosen was a Netbook because it a lot hard for us to keep on buying books every year for our learning.  

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